Notso Niceley
Saturday, October 04, 2008
A Hawaii Moment
Walking this evening it occurred
imperceptible at first
then a sound on the edge of consciousness
relentlessly approaching like
Xenophon's
10,000
A trade wind shower
pouring for a few seconds
and departing just as it had arrived
A Hawaii moment
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very good haiku. like it.
like also your new header picture(s) & layout.
10:52 AM
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1 comment:
very good haiku. like it.
like also your new header picture(s) & layout.
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