Saturday, October 04, 2008

A Hawaii Moment

Walking this evening it occurred

imperceptible at first

then a sound on the edge of consciousness

relentlessly approaching like Xenophon's 10,000

A trade wind shower

pouring for a few seconds

and departing just as it had arrived

A Hawaii moment

1 comment:

rhyme child said...

very good haiku. like it.
like also your new header picture(s) & layout.